I hope the last panel isn’t the punchline and that there’s at least another page after this.
I’m digging the Kirbyesqueness, but would like a stronger replication of it, which, if the title panel is included, works well in the fourth panel. It’s something about the inking and designs on machines that really makes Kirby backgrounds. Maybe add some Kirby dots around the machinery in panel four, or make it a joke in each panel, have them floating about endlessly, in spite of your less is better approach to this sort of thing?
The names are funny, Red and Hothead, as obvious parodies of the F4 members. You can have “The Thing” walk in as a giant “thing”, tee-hee. OK, I doubt you’ll do that, but I think it’d be hilarious.
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hardtravelinghero
April 5, 2012 at 9:53 pm (UTC -6) Link to this comment
I hope the last panel isn’t the punchline and that there’s at least another page after this.
I’m digging the Kirbyesqueness, but would like a stronger replication of it, which, if the title panel is included, works well in the fourth panel. It’s something about the inking and designs on machines that really makes Kirby backgrounds. Maybe add some Kirby dots around the machinery in panel four, or make it a joke in each panel, have them floating about endlessly, in spite of your less is better approach to this sort of thing?
The names are funny, Red and Hothead, as obvious parodies of the F4 members. You can have “The Thing” walk in as a giant “thing”, tee-hee. OK, I doubt you’ll do that, but I think it’d be hilarious.
Drawing Board: Inventor p. 2 | ArmzRace
June 28, 2012 at 12:12 am (UTC -6) Link to this comment
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