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September 20, 2013 at 7:22 am (UTC -6)
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This is a fun scene and I think the inking is very strong and adds a lot. I wonder if it would have been interesting to have Calimbo be small in each panel to show his current state. Mr. Mustache foreshortening is off to me (my usual complaint, although Calimbo looks fine, but I think that’s because I just think the drawing is really cool and deals with the smallness I just mentioned) and I think it is because you make the “front” body parts too big for the distance. For this scale the body would have to be like 7 feet away. No one has ever handed me a phone and I though, “Wow, his head is half the size of his head.” I just looked in a mirror and fully stretched out my really long arms and only got my hand and head to be equal. Maybe try some where you only have a minor change in size/scale to see if that proportion works better. I think you might be worried about your images looking too flat, not trusting yourself, and overcompensating. Obviously, feel free to disagree. (Of course this is really because you have giant hands and a tiny head.)
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